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Wednesday, 4 December 2019

MNL SLJ Teaser Week No.5

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Niko,

    What an incredible job you have done on your profile page about Markus Persson. I didn’t know he was known as Notch, what a cool nickname. Do you have a nickname?

    I really like how you’ve included pictures of the minecraft logo and Mr Persson. They really enhance the experience for your reader. Well done!

    I notice you’ve included the same fact about Notch’s age when Minecraft was released twice. Do you perhaps know another fact that you can put on your profile page instead?

    Do you play minecraft often? What’s your favourite part of the game?

    Hei konā mai,
    Shannon

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