I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
What an outstanding and insightful post. You have some amazing ideas and changes you could implement, you’d truly have a brilliant school.
I really like how you’ve included cheaper food. Sometimes people aren’t as fortunate as others so I like how you’ve considered this fact to make sure everyone has a better opportunity.
I see you would like to hire more fun teachers as well. What defines a fun teacher to you?
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Kia Ora Niko,
ReplyDeleteWhat an outstanding and insightful post. You have some amazing ideas and changes you could implement, you’d truly have a brilliant school.
I really like how you’ve included cheaper food. Sometimes people aren’t as fortunate as others so I like how you’ve considered this fact to make sure everyone has a better opportunity.
I see you would like to hire more fun teachers as well. What defines a fun teacher to you?
I really like your colourful background. It’s very appealing to your readers. Did you consider including an image to enhance your post? Here are some tips for making eye catching blog posts if you need some inspiration.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon