I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi Niko from Louis I thought your animation was really funny. Next time maybe try and make the scuba diver walk sort of normally or you could just make him dive in so that he isn't walking with his head up and his arms in the end.
I really liked how you put the blood in the animation, and how the diver goes in the water, maybe make it like so the legs of the diver moves when hes jumping in the water,` and its really funny.
Kia ora. I am Alex from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked how it had a sense of humor to it witch made it quite funny to watch, I learnt that to make sure boat doesn't break in half when a shark jumps on it, I don't think you need to add anything or change anything I think you did a really good job. Please visit my blog here
Kia ora. I am Aysha from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked how you put a lot of effort into this animation. I learnt that you can add so many different things into an animation like your's. Maybe you could add a bit more detail into your animation. Please visit my blog here
Hello Aysha, Thanks for commenting on my post I thought i should have added more detail to it aswell im glad you learnt from my animation. 😃😃😃😆😆 From Niko
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Niko from Louis
ReplyDeleteI thought your animation was really funny.
Next time maybe try and make the scuba diver walk sort of normally or you could just make him dive in so that he isn't walking with his head up and his arms in the end.
Hi Niko
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you put the blood in the animation, and how the diver goes in the water, maybe make it like so the legs of the diver moves when hes jumping in the water,`
and its really funny.
Kia ora. I am Alex from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how it had a sense of humor to it witch made it quite funny to watch,
I learnt that to make sure boat doesn't break in half when a shark jumps on it,
I don't think you need to add anything or change anything I think you did a really good job.
Please visit my blog
here
Hi Alex,
Deletethank you sooo much for your comment. It made me happy to know you enjoyed it 😁😁😁.
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Aysha from Gisborne Intermediate School.
I really liked how you put a lot of effort into this animation.
I learnt that you can add so many different things into an animation like your's.
Maybe you could add a bit more detail into your animation.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Aysha
Hello Aysha,
DeleteThanks for commenting on my post I thought i should have added more detail to it aswell im glad you learnt from my animation. 😃😃😃😆😆
From Niko