I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
You’ve done a tremendous job explaining the water project. Some people are very unfortunate in their access to safe drinking water. We’re very lucky here in New Zealand that we have the tools and infrastructure necessary to make sure everyone gets clean water. It prevents a lot of illness and leads to longer lifespans here.
I like that you included a section with the solution and the goal of the solution. It is very clear and informative. Did you know that donating overseas is one of the best ways to donate to charity because the money can be used more efficiently to help out more people.
How did you hear about the water project?
Have you considered increasing the size of your text so it is easier for your readers to see?
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Niko,
ReplyDeleteYou’ve done a tremendous job explaining the water project. Some people are very unfortunate in their access to safe drinking water. We’re very lucky here in New Zealand that we have the tools and infrastructure necessary to make sure everyone gets clean water. It prevents a lot of illness and leads to longer lifespans here.
I like that you included a section with the solution and the goal of the solution. It is very clear and informative. Did you know that donating overseas is one of the best ways to donate to charity because the money can be used more efficiently to help out more people.
How did you hear about the water project?
Have you considered increasing the size of your text so it is easier for your readers to see?
Happy blogging!
Hei konā mai,
Shannon