I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Friday, 10 May 2019
Apocalypse
Quickly, I ran down the hallway. My oldest brother grabbed the twins from there room. Me and my 11 sibling looked out the window in terror. It was dark and stormy. There were 7 tornadoes all in different places of our town creatures coming out of the air and screeching. “Get down to the basement now” said my oldest brother. Him and my older sisters ran out to the garage i am the fourth oldest. I grabbed all 7 of my siblings and we ran to the basement. We heard the window smash behind us then the screech again. Now 1000 times louder we all blocked our ears. I told my siblings to get to the basement. The creature was black and smiley it had a body like a spider a head like a dog but with no eyes and a huge mouth. It jumped on top of me it's slime dripping on my face I screamed. Luckly, just in time my 5 year old brother who had not listened hit it on the back with a knife. It turned around he dropped the knife and screamed. Quickly, I grabbed a pole from dads camping kit and I rammed it through its stomach It roared with pain. Several more dropped through the roof i grabbed my little brothers hand and we ran. I slammed the door closed and put the pole through the handle. We sat there in silence we heard our older siblings swinging axes and killing the monsters. Crash one of the monsters arms came through the door. I pushed the little window open we climbed out we ran of after years only a 10th of humanity was left Most of my family had died including me.
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