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Friday, 16 August 2019

Zoos should be banned. As they are fun the animals are depressed. I went to the zoo when I was five and the animals were happily living their lives but now after six years of captivity they are depressed. The gorillas for example used to swing and do tricks now they just sit there and do nothing. Or the lions who hide behind the rocks instead of coming up to the glass.

Also the enclosures. The gorilla enclosures has dried up grass and a dirty river. They don't want that they want to be free and run and play. There's not even a tree in the enclosure not one. They weren't made to sit down and have none ripe food at them.

How do they get the animals? It not like oh come hop in my truck and live the rest of your life in misery. No they would have to hurt and shoot the animals. I do however agree with rehabilitation centres. Help the animals and let them go but zoos they just ruin animals lives.

1 comment:

  1. Hi, Niko. You have written three good paragraphs about why Zoos are not good for the animals. You have also given some good examples of how you have noticed changes to the animals over time. One thing you could work on is rereading it to ensure it makes sense. Your second sentence was a little confusing and I am wondering if you could fix it to make it clearer.

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